下面這些句子是雅思基礎班文法課的作業，所選句子全部來自于雅思高分作文（ 7 分水準以上），對於其他要考雅思的同學來說也可以當作一個很好的參考，看看下面這些句子你的表達和這裏提供的 model
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1.
一個人的實際能力才是企業所真正看重的。
It is one's practical capability that enterprises truly value.
（這句話用強調句句型表達效果比較好。）
It is one's practical capability that enterprises truly value.
（這句話用強調句句型表達效果比較好。）
2.
我認為我們發明一種新的語言來取代英語是沒有必要的.
I don't think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English.
（這句話有太多的同學用"instead of"來表示“取代”的意思，再次強調，instead of是介詞片語，表示"……而不是……"的意思。）
I don't think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English.
（這句話有太多的同學用"instead of"來表示“取代”的意思，再次強調，instead of是介詞片語，表示"……而不是……"的意思。）
3.
然而，關於它是一件好事還是壞事，人們有不同的態度。
People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse.
（這句話有很多人用"good thing"和"bad thing"表示“好事”和“壞事”，在書面語中推薦用blessing和curse，絕對的less common vocabulary!）
People, nevertheless, hold various opinions in terms of the issue whether it is a blessing or a curse.
（這句話有很多人用"good thing"和"bad thing"表示“好事”和“壞事”，在書面語中推薦用blessing和curse，絕對的less common vocabulary!）
4.
很多國家的失業率在不斷攀升這一事實是我們無法否認的。
The fact that the unemployment rates in quite a number of countries keep rising can not be denied.
The fact that the unemployment rates in quite a number of countries keep rising can not be denied.
5.
在給出我的觀點之前，我認為看一看問題的兩面是很重要的。
I hold it essential to examine the both sides of the issue before presenting my viewpoint.
（這句話有幾個重點：首先表示“看一看”不宜用"look at"，那是“盯著……看”的意思，examine是“仔細審視”的意思，用在這裏正合適。“問題”在這裏應該用issue而不是problem，因為problem相當於trouble，一定是負面的。Issue表示“有爭議的問題”，大家記住，雅思作文裏討論的話題絕大多數都屬於issue。此外，present屬於less common vocabulary,是“give”的升級版。）
I hold it essential to examine the both sides of the issue before presenting my viewpoint.
（這句話有幾個重點：首先表示“看一看”不宜用"look at"，那是“盯著……看”的意思，examine是“仔細審視”的意思，用在這裏正合適。“問題”在這裏應該用issue而不是problem，因為problem相當於trouble，一定是負面的。Issue表示“有爭議的問題”，大家記住，雅思作文裏討論的話題絕大多數都屬於issue。此外，present屬於less common vocabulary,是“give”的升級版。）
6.
不同的人們對於全球化是否有利於經濟的發展這個問題持有不同的看法.
Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether globalization is beneficial to the economic development.
Different people hold various viewpoints as to the issue whether globalization is beneficial to the economic development.
7.
令人感到遺憾的是大多數人所在乎的僅僅就只是他們怎麼樣才能更多地賺到錢。
It is a pity that all the majority of people care about is how they could be paid more.
It is a pity that all the majority of people care about is how they could be paid more.
8.
隨著越來越多的婦女參與全職工作，由誰來照顧孩子已經成為了社會上的一個問題。
With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.
（注意with引導的成分名詞後面必須跟動詞的ing形式，很多同學這一題一上來就寫"With more and more women take part in full-time job"是錯誤的。）
With increasing number of women taking part in full-time jobs, who should take care of children has become a social issue.
（注意with引導的成分名詞後面必須跟動詞的ing形式，很多同學這一題一上來就寫"With more and more women take part in full-time job"是錯誤的。）
第二單元：從句
1.
（Letter） 我們這次還是約在上次一起吃晚飯的餐廳見面吧！
Let’s meet at the restaurant where we had dinner together last time!
Let’s meet at the restaurant where we had dinner together last time!
2.
（寫作） 環境保護是一個如今為人們廣為討論的一個話題。
The environmental protection is a topic （which is） widely discussed by people nowadays.
The environmental protection is a topic （which is） widely discussed by people nowadays.
3.
（寫作） 我們必須承認，那些反對此觀點的人們也有一定的道理。
Admittedly, those who oppose to the viewpoint also have their reasons to a certain extent.
Admittedly, those who oppose to the viewpoint also have their reasons to a certain extent.
4. （寫作）
人們往往會和觀念與自己相近的人交朋友。
People tend to make friends with those people whose viewpoints are similar to their own.
People tend to make friends with those people whose viewpoints are similar to their own.
People
tend to make friends with those who share similar viewpoints to their own.
5. （寫作）
手提電腦如今如此普及的一個重要原因就是它的使用方便。
A major
reason why lap-tops are so popular nowadays is that it is easy to use.
6.（口語） 我計畫於2013年回國，到那時候我將年滿30歲。
I am
planning to come back in 2013, by which time （when） I
will be 30.
7.（口語）
《荷馬史詩》是一本很精彩的書，我從中學到了很多。
Homer
Epic is a wonderful book, from which I have learned a lot.
8.（口語）
最激動人心的一次旅行經歷是在巴厘島，在那裏我有生以來第一次體驗了潛水。
The most exciting traveling
experience for me is the one in
Bali, where I experienced diving
for the first time in my life.
9.（口語） 我父母一共生了三個孩子，我是其中最大的。
My
parents have three children, among whom I am the eldest.
10.（口語）
David和我住在一個寢室已經兩年了，他是一個非常搞笑的傢伙。
David,
with whom I have been sharing a dorm for 2 years, is quite a funny guy.
David,
who is quite a funny guy, has been sharing a dorm with me for 2 years.
第三單元
Describe
what you would do if you receive a lot of money.
I would definitely donate at least one third of the money to the charity so that the poor could be financially supported.
I would definitely donate at least one third of the money to the charity so that the poor could be financially supported.
Describe
a musical instrument （Guitar）So effective has playing guitar been proved to
attract girls that the number of college guys learning it has been soaring.
Describe
a clothing brand you like.
There are
a lot of clothing brands I adore, with Armani being my favorite.
Describe
a city you have visited.
Sydney is known for a number of beautiful scenic spots, with the Sydney Opera House being the most impressive.
Sydney is known for a number of beautiful scenic spots, with the Sydney Opera House being the most impressive.
第四單元
Describe
a schoolmate of yours.
So popular was he that he was said to have attracted the attention from talent scouts.
So popular was he that he was said to have attracted the attention from talent scouts.
為了不讓這樣的悲劇重演，我們有必要在城市採取更多治安措施。
It is necessary for us to adopt more security measures in cities in order not to repeat such tragedies.
It is necessary for us to adopt more security measures in cities in order not to repeat such tragedies.
我認為孩子表現惡劣是家長的過錯。
I think children's behaving badly is the parents' fault.
I think children's behaving badly is the parents' fault.
不少人認為寫信被使用手機取代是不可取代的趨勢。
Quite a number of people believe that letter writing's being replaced by mobile phones is an inevitable trend.
Quite a number of people believe that letter writing's being replaced by mobile phones is an inevitable trend.
Do
people take as much exercise as in the past?
Facing ever-fierce competition today, most people today are stressed-out and no longer taking as much as exercise as in the past.
Facing ever-fierce competition today, most people today are stressed-out and no longer taking as much as exercise as in the past.
Describe
your career so far.
Having graduated from the university, I was offered a job from a multinational company as a market assistant, mainly taking charge of the collection of marketing statistics.
Having graduated from the university, I was offered a job from a multinational company as a market assistant, mainly taking charge of the collection of marketing statistics.
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